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		<title>By: mountainh2o</title>
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		<dc:creator>mountainh2o</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 24 May 2010 02:59:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great piece!  I too write, and and will use these 10 tips constructively.  A writer friend of mine turned me on to this. 

Writing cleanly, with punch, and still easy to read is an art.  I have been working on it for thirty years.  I put it on paper, then revise my work a dozen times before I like it.  I look for anything that seems jumbled, so that it is smooth and the story, &quot;keeps going&quot;.  I agree with you on not wanting them to stop and think about what you said.

Thanks for sure!  I have a full length novel on this site.

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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great piece!  I too write, and and will use these 10 tips constructively.  A writer friend of mine turned me on to this. </p>
<p>Writing cleanly, with punch, and still easy to read is an art.  I have been working on it for thirty years.  I put it on paper, then revise my work a dozen times before I like it.  I look for anything that seems jumbled, so that it is smooth and the story, &#8220;keeps going&#8221;.  I agree with you on not wanting them to stop and think about what you said.</p>
<p>Thanks for sure!  I have a full length novel on this site.</p>
<p><a href="http://www.digeststorycom" rel="nofollow">http://www.digeststorycom</a></p>
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		<title>By: Writer&#8217;s block busters &#171; this space is mine</title>
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		<dc:creator>Writer&#8217;s block busters &#171; this space is mine</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 22 Nov 2009 01:37:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] if you haven&#8217;t already done so, and start exchanging/critiquing/etc. Keep an eye out for problems that might need repair, but don&#8217;t edit so much that you strip the meaning out of your [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] if you haven&#8217;t already done so, and start exchanging/critiquing/etc. Keep an eye out for problems that might need repair, but don&#8217;t edit so much that you strip the meaning out of your [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Bad advice for stupid writers &#171; The Critical I</title>
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		<dc:creator>Bad advice for stupid writers &#171; The Critical I</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 29 Apr 2009 05:19:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] April, 2009   An actual professional editor called Pat Holt posted a big pile of crap on her blog purporting to be the inside scoop on what editors look for in manuscripts. It&#8217;s [...]</description>
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		<title>By: More on Characters &#171; Hope and Faith</title>
		<link>http://www.holtuncensored.com/hu/the-ten-mistakes/comment-page-1/#comment-281</link>
		<dc:creator>More on Characters &#171; Hope and Faith</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 27 Apr 2009 21:31:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] 27, 2009 by sheryltut    Recently I stumbled upon a blog entry by an Editorial Consultant, Pat Holt, that I found interesting and wanted to share. It&#8217;s an article of ten common mistakes in [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] 27, 2009 by sheryltut    Recently I stumbled upon a blog entry by an Editorial Consultant, Pat Holt, that I found interesting and wanted to share. It&#8217;s an article of ten common mistakes in [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Ten Mistakes Writers Don&#8217;t See (But Can Easily Fix) &#171; Cloud of Witnesses</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ten Mistakes Writers Don&#8217;t See (But Can Easily Fix) &#171; Cloud of Witnesses</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 21 Apr 2009 02:14:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] and critic at The San Francisco Chronicle for 16 years (1982-1998), provides a helpful list of 10 common (but easily correctable) mistakes writers often make.&#160; Some examples: 2. FLAT WRITING “He wanted to know but couldn’t [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] and critic at The San Francisco Chronicle for 16 years (1982-1998), provides a helpful list of 10 common (but easily correctable) mistakes writers often make.&#160; Some examples: 2. FLAT WRITING “He wanted to know but couldn’t [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Don&#8217;t be an amateur &#171; Aspiring Author</title>
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		<dc:creator>Don&#8217;t be an amateur &#171; Aspiring Author</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 20 Apr 2009 02:33:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Ten Common Mistakes that dismiss you as an amateur, from Holt Uncensored, a blog about the book industry (via literary agent Nathan Branford&#8217;s blog). The following is a list I’ll be referring to people *before* they submit anything in writing to anybody (me, agent, publisher, your mom, your boss). From email messages and front-page news in the New York Times to published books and magazine articles, the 10 ouchies listed here crop up everywhere. They’re so pernicious that even respected Internet columnists are not immune. [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] Ten Common Mistakes that dismiss you as an amateur, from Holt Uncensored, a blog about the book industry (via literary agent Nathan Branford&#8217;s blog). The following is a list I’ll be referring to people *before* they submit anything in writing to anybody (me, agent, publisher, your mom, your boss). From email messages and front-page news in the New York Times to published books and magazine articles, the 10 ouchies listed here crop up everywhere. They’re so pernicious that even respected Internet columnists are not immune. [...]</p>
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		<title>By: useful reading &#171; the adverb is not your friend</title>
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		<dc:creator>useful reading &#171; the adverb is not your friend</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 20 Apr 2009 01:48:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] April 19, 2009 by wordsbyrkf    Ten Mistakes Writers Don&#8217;t See. [...]</description>
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		<title>By: (Hopefully) Helpful Article</title>
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		<dc:creator>(Hopefully) Helpful Article</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 18 Apr 2009 05:12:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] (Hopefully) Helpful Article  Commenta  18th April , 2009      I just wanted to share this article listing 10 Beginner Writer Mistakes: http://www.holtuncensored.com/hu/the-ten-mistakes/ [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] (Hopefully) Helpful Article  Commenta  18th April , 2009      I just wanted to share this article listing 10 Beginner Writer Mistakes: <a href="http://www.holtuncensored.com/hu/the-ten-mistakes/" rel="nofollow">http://www.holtuncensored.com/hu/the-ten-mistakes/</a> [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Christian suspense novelist Adam Blumer &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Holt Uncensored » The Ten Mistakes</title>
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		<dc:creator>Christian suspense novelist Adam Blumer &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Holt Uncensored » The Ten Mistakes</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 05 Mar 2009 16:41:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Holt Uncensored » The Ten Mistakes. [...]</description>
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		<title>By: Holt Uncensored on Empty Adverbs &#124; freelance-zone.com</title>
		<link>http://www.holtuncensored.com/hu/the-ten-mistakes/comment-page-1/#comment-140</link>
		<dc:creator>Holt Uncensored on Empty Adverbs &#124; freelance-zone.com</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 04 Jan 2009 03:51:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] stumbled across this great article on Holt Uncensored about common writer mistakes. The entire piece is definitely worth a look, but the payoff for me [...]</description>
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